I really liked this, and for some reason the little bit at the very end with Doctor Red made me like it even more. Excellent job.
Thanks! Also, glad you like the part at the end. I sort of threw it on at the end to try to explain where the package came from, which was sort of a mystery for the rest of the movie, but when I showed my parents they were a bit confused about what what was happening. Hopefully that was just them.
As an epileptic, I found this pretty entertaining. Animation is a bit jumpy, but better than a lot of people's first cartoons, so I can't complain. I look forward to future projects from you.
For the goth kids
The artwork was good, though the rhymes were a little painful, you're forgiven since English isn't your native language and most people who are native speakers can't rhyme to save their lives anyway.
This seemed like it was trying too hard. It would have been creepier if the girl looked normal instead of like a typical manga goth lolita - you know, white skin, long black hair with complicated curls, a frilly old-timey dress and armwarmers...once I saw she was dressed in the usual fare for that subculture I knew pretty much exactly what the tone for this was going to be.
What worried me the most, though, was how I didn't even flinch when she held her brother aloft by his umbilical cord. Had I watched this several years ago I would have cried.
And I mean that in the nicest possible way. A lot of younger kids' games have really obnoxious music and are just really too busy...
Next time I babysit I will show the little ones this. ^^
I live in a place where few people own guns so I can't really study them myself. This is very definitely amazingly helpful.
Glad to hear it. Hope you got something out of it.
This is the best thing ever. I was going to dock a point for there not being anything else to do after you finish...but the prospect of a sequel fills me with glee the likes of which the world has never seen.
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